lake ontario: a concrete poem by Monique Tschofen

A calligram written with only the nine letters that appear in LAKE ONTARIO — a, e, i, k, l, n, o, r, t — set inside an outline of the lake. Twelve pages, turned one at a time. Written in response to the renaming of the lake by the United States on 27 August 2026.

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                                                                                                                        lake


















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                                                                                                                        lake
                                                                                                                    ontario lake

















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                                                                                                                        lake
                                                                                                                    ontario lake
                                                                         ontario a lake                       to  tell  it  not one
















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                                                                                                                        lake
                                                                                                                    ontario lake
                                                                         ontario a lake                       to  tell  it  not one
                                                          letter  in  it alien to it rain into             rain  root  into root iron















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                                                                                                                        lake
                                                                                                                    ontario lake
                                                                         ontario a lake                       to  tell  it  not one
                                                          letter  in  it alien to it rain into             rain  root  into root iron
                                               into  an  inlet  an oar into an oak i kneel at it i      look  into it i lean into it i
                                     take  no note a loon alone on a lit line a tern at a tilt in air a teal an oriole a rail an errant













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                                                                                                                        lake
                                                                                                                    ontario lake
                                                                         ontario a lake                       to  tell  it  not one
                                                          letter  in  it alien to it rain into             rain  root  into root iron
                                               into  an  inlet  an oar into an oak i kneel at it i      look  into it i lean into it i
                                     take  no note a loon alone on a lit line a tern at a tilt in air a teal an oriole a rail an errant
                                 itinerant onlooker a nekton in it a tannin in it a latent iron in it no otter in a rotten net an antler
                              in  a torrent a laker at noon a tanker at nine a tiller a keel a knot in a net toronto on it trenton on it
                           an  ontarian at it no one in it to title it no one to tell it no one at all it retain no letter it tolerate no










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                                                                                                                        lake
                                                                                                                    ontario lake
                                                                         ontario a lake                       to  tell  it  not one
                                                          letter  in  it alien to it rain into             rain  root  into root iron
                                               into  an  inlet  an oar into an oak i kneel at it i      look  into it i lean into it i
                                     take  no note a loon alone on a lit line a tern at a tilt in air a teal an oriole a rail an errant
                                 itinerant onlooker a nekton in it a tannin in it a latent iron in it no otter in a rotten net an antler
                              in  a torrent a laker at noon a tanker at nine a tiller a keel a knot in a net toronto on it trenton on it
                           an  ontarian at it no one in it to title it no one to tell it no one at all it retain no letter it tolerate no
                        error  it  take  no  note  attention  intention  iteration  alteration  narration notation lineation orientation
                     alienation  alliteration  reiteration  toleration  relation  oration ration relation elation one letter later one
                  letter  later nitrate rain alkaline air alien root aeolian rain not one alien letter a tarn in a lake a rill into a







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                                                                                                                        lake
                                                                                                                    ontario lake
                                                                         ontario a lake                       to  tell  it  not one
                                                          letter  in  it alien to it rain into             rain  root  into root iron
                                               into  an  inlet  an oar into an oak i kneel at it i      look  into it i lean into it i
                                     take  no note a loon alone on a lit line a tern at a tilt in air a teal an oriole a rail an errant
                                 itinerant onlooker a nekton in it a tannin in it a latent iron in it no otter in a rotten net an antler
                              in  a torrent a laker at noon a tanker at nine a tiller a keel a knot in a net toronto on it trenton on it
                           an  ontarian at it no one in it to title it no one to tell it no one at all it retain no letter it tolerate no
                        error  it  take  no  note  attention  intention  iteration  alteration  narration notation lineation orientation
                     alienation  alliteration  reiteration  toleration  relation  oration ration relation elation one letter later one
                  letter  later nitrate rain alkaline air alien root aeolian rain not one alien letter a tarn in a lake a rill into a
               lake  a  lake  a  littoral take an eternal literal tale in a lateral atonal lake a loon a rational rake an irrational
             ration  i talk to it it talk to no one i learn no letter i akin to it it not akin to i i take one letter to it i take
          one  letter or i take it all it eat no oar it eat no iron it eat all it eat an aeon a taker a teller a tiller a toiler




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                                                                                                                        lake
                                                                                                                    ontario lake
                                                                         ontario a lake                       to  tell  it  not one
                                                          letter  in  it alien to it rain into             rain  root  into root iron
                                               into  an  inlet  an oar into an oak i kneel at it i      look  into it i lean into it i
                                     take  no note a loon alone on a lit line a tern at a tilt in air a teal an oriole a rail an errant
                                 itinerant onlooker a nekton in it a tannin in it a latent iron in it no otter in a rotten net an antler
                              in  a torrent a laker at noon a tanker at nine a tiller a keel a knot in a net toronto on it trenton on it
                           an  ontarian at it no one in it to title it no one to tell it no one at all it retain no letter it tolerate no
                        error  it  take  no  note  attention  intention  iteration  alteration  narration notation lineation orientation
                     alienation  alliteration  reiteration  toleration  relation  oration ration relation elation one letter later one
                  letter  later nitrate rain alkaline air alien root aeolian rain not one alien letter a tarn in a lake a rill into a
               lake  a  lake  a  littoral take an eternal literal tale in a lateral atonal lake a loon a rational rake an irrational
             ration  i talk to it it talk to no one i learn no letter i akin to it it not akin to i i take one letter to it i take
          one  letter or i take it all it eat no oar it eat no iron it eat all it eat an aeon a taker a teller a tiller a toiler
        a  loner  a laker o lake o little inlet o iron o oak o alkaline o aeolian in air in rain in iron in it in it in it an
     era later an aeon later an ontario later nearer nearer a terrain no one enter no one alter i alter no letter it alter
   all a rattle a nettle at an inlet a talon on a tern a lilt in a tone letter to letter root to root rain to rain one

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                                                                                                                        lake
                                                                                                                    ontario lake
                                                                         ontario a lake                       to  tell  it  not one
                                                          letter  in  it alien to it rain into             rain  root  into root iron
                                               into  an  inlet  an oar into an oak i kneel at it i      look  into it i lean into it i
                                     take  no note a loon alone on a lit line a tern at a tilt in air a teal an oriole a rail an errant
                                 itinerant onlooker a nekton in it a tannin in it a latent iron in it no otter in a rotten net an antler
                              in  a torrent a laker at noon a tanker at nine a tiller a keel a knot in a net toronto on it trenton on it
                           an  ontarian at it no one in it to title it no one to tell it no one at all it retain no letter it tolerate no
                        error  it  take  no  note  attention  intention  iteration  alteration  narration notation lineation orientation
                     alienation  alliteration  reiteration  toleration  relation  oration ration relation elation one letter later one
                  letter  later nitrate rain alkaline air alien root aeolian rain not one alien letter a tarn in a lake a rill into a
               lake  a  lake  a  littoral take an eternal literal tale in a lateral atonal lake a loon a rational rake an irrational
             ration  i talk to it it talk to no one i learn no letter i akin to it it not akin to i i take one letter to it i take
          one  letter or i take it all it eat no oar it eat no iron it eat all it eat an aeon a taker a teller a tiller a toiler
        a  loner  a laker o lake o little inlet o iron o oak o alkaline o aeolian in air in rain in iron in it in it in it an
     era later an aeon later an ontario later nearer nearer a terrain no one enter no one alter i alter no letter it alter
   all a rattle a nettle at an inlet a talon on a tern a lilt in a tone letter to letter root to root rain to rain one
 to one no litter in it no error in it all   eaten  all  not  eaten  i  kneel  at  it  i  look  into  it all in it
 no relation alone i learn a  lake                                        alone i intone o alone a lake
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The poems, made up only of the letters in Lake Ontario, and inspired by the US' renaming of this shared body of water on August 27, 2026, are set inside an outline of the lake. In the upper right is Prince Edward County; the gap along the lower edge represents the New York shore, which at that latitude divides the water. The poems' constraints mean that words like the, or and, or water, cannot be included, and neither can anything plural, past, or ongoing, which seems to be an apt allegory of our political situation.

— Monique Tschofen

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